[quote=@Etcetera]
[@Drake Baku]

I'm confused. Is there a reason the monologue is between action symbols?
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That was a misunderstanding from my part on the writing style rules
It stated clearly about cursive talking and actions between *
But i dont remember having seen anything about monologue/ thinking in the 2 times i read the rules
As such when i began writing i thought i had to put it between ** as well to show it is not talking (while having forgotten to use cursive) haha 
Sorry i shall fix it, i assume it should be without any indications?
Asking to be sure, i will change it now but if i mess up again i can change it again haha)