[quote=@Drake Baku] That was a misunderstanding from my part on the writing style rules It stated clearly about cursive talking and actions between * But i dont remember having seen anything about monologue/ thinking in the 2 times i read the rules As such when i began writing i thought i had to put it between ** as well to show it is not talking (while having forgotten to use cursive) haha Sorry i shall fix it, i assume it should be without any indications? Asking to be sure, i will change it now but if i mess up again i can change it again haha) [/quote] How it works is that there isn't thinking—none of us knows what each character [i]really[/i] thinks about the situation. The action symbols indicate that an observable action is taking place, like *Jumps into the air*. Anything that isn't in action symbols is assumed to be spoken aloud, unless modified by them somehow, like *Mumbles*.