[@Drake Baku]

A few things, after conferring with my co-GM.


1) Please change the name. 'Blade Shuriken' is not a human name.

2) The mutation part of the quirk is unnecessary. Every emitter has modified internal biology.

3) You kinda explain your quirk's limitations like this is a stat-based roleplay. Can you reword it a little clearer?

4) You can still have the Hero great-Grandfather, but being poor being the only reason your character isn't in UA isn't really what we're looking for. His backstory needs to clarify that at present he isn't good enough for U.A. regardless.

5) Please revise the spelling, grammar and formatting errors to make it a little more readable.


[@vancexentan]

I'm sorry for the wait! I've been stressed out recently. Tomorrow I hope to post.