[@LostButterfly92] She seems okay for the most part, I kinda thought her backstory was a little barebone but it's okay for the most part. My first thing is that you can maybe expand a bit upon how she responded to getting her powers and stuff (if that makes sense). My other thing is that a Delta-crystal can *not* give you chromatic powers, you would have to be exposed to two different forms of energy. Not that it matters because she's more or less a Red anyhow, I don't really want people to be Chromatic unless they [i]absolutely[/i] have to.

Now, about her powers, I kinda feel like you didn't paint the full picture of what [i]exactly[/i] she can do. Like the way you described it it's like you already [i]assume[/i] people know how the ability works. I want clarity on character's abilities and how they work, so we don't have any issues down the line (Look at some of the accepted characters so you see what I mean). You also vaguely mention that she can create minions and that feels like it deserves a section of it'sown. [i]Maybe[/i] provide some more examples how she can practically use her ability.

Onto the plant sense; while plants do have a sensory ability they [i]probably[/i] wouldn't be able to give her any useful or decipherable information. Now, what if instead, she can sense the aura of plants and anything that touches them? [s]And it's still red, don't ask questions.[/s] Her weaknesses are kinda weak, too, not being able to regenerate is just... being human. Her power requiring concentration is more of a limit imo. Again, I don't really have a clear idea of how strong she is. Still a better power than death manipulation. lol

Again, she's not rejected I just want her power section reworked. She seems cool so far.