[@TheMerlin] I was offline, and then another thread pushed this down and I didn't see you post.

It's late so I didn't read the whole thing, but I did skim it. Without reading it proper, it looks like a pretty good check. If there was something extra I would want, it would be a cut-and-dry paragraph towards the begining of the check that told me what it is I'm suppose to be doing here and summarized the plot. you also have a blocked youtube link in your check, which makes the whole sheet look defunct. might wanna replace/remove that.

Another thing to note is that you're fairly new. Not even two months in and you're starting an RP. If you don't have any luck with your new RP, you might just want to join a few and get the forum familiar with you. Not only will this make your renown grow, but it'll introduce you to potential players.