[quote=@BrokenPromise] [@TheMerlin] I was offline, and then another thread pushed this down and I didn't see you post. It's late so I didn't read the whole thing, but I did skim it. Without reading it proper, it looks like a pretty good check. If there was something extra I would want, it would be a cut-and-dry paragraph towards the begining of the check that told me what it is I'm suppose to be doing here and summarized the plot. you also have a blocked youtube link in your check, which makes the whole sheet look defunct. might wanna replace/remove that. Another thing to note is that you're fairly new. Not even two months in and you're starting an RP. If you don't have any luck with your new RP, you might just want to join a few and get the forum familiar with you. Not only will this make your renown grow, but it'll introduce you to potential players. [/quote] Oh, how awkward. Guess I'll have to pick a new theme song for the roleplay or just remove it entirely. Might seem obnoxious to have a theme song in the first place. Decisions. Anyways, thanks for taking the time to have a quick look. I'll see what I can do about making a summary. As for starting the roleplay, I thought it'd be the best way to introduce myself to the site and the community. I hope I'll make a good impression, but I suppose I can find another roleplay to join as well. I'm just afraid of stretching myself too thin as I tend to only be able to focus on one roleplay at a time. Well I'll do my best anyway. Thanks for the advice once again.