[quote=@Achronum] [@Hero] Here is my CS for initial review. I took some liberty with where I put the height and eye color though so definitely let me know if I need to move it! [/quote] If it's done it looks good. Once other Deer are up, it'll be good to establish relations with the other heirs. Move it over to the character tab when you get a chance. [quote=@Obscene Symphony] I'll prob edit this a hundred times, but here she be! [/quote] I'll DM you about a few things for this CS, once we clarify that up it'll be accepted. The other one is good, too, and I'll reiterate what I said with Achronum's CS; another heir means the two of you should have some sort of pre-established relationship.