[@Smystar99] No worries Shannon! It doesn’t bother me at all! I like that you’ve been building backstory for characters, it helps them feel more alive. But if I do notice any part that might be an issue, I’ll point it out. But i’d rather focus on fun and not stress. The only thing I can think of at the moment is that it was a snake, not a tree branch falling that killed Badgerclaw. I think that’s what I remember that I wanted to mention. Other than that, I really enjoyed the posts! I can hopefully start working on another reply soon. Having an almost toddler is quite the adventure.