[quote=Tyki]
i couldn't find a good one so i just picked one >.>Name: LasaaraAge: 178Race: ice dragonGender: femalePersonality: variant depending on the situationMagic: draconic ice magic (blue flames, ice breath, etc.))Skills: aside from the normal draconic stuff she's learned to take the form of an elf (though she can't get the eyes right as they still look reptilian) but if she stays in it for more than a week it begins to hurtGear: nothing of noteBio: TBR (in other words: too fucking lazy >.>) Misc: she lives on a glacier and eats fish instead of land animals like most other dragons
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Give me a reason he's in the story. I mean, he's a big, rather generic dragon, and you've cunningly avoided giving him a personality, so I see no reason he should be doing anything besides eating fish on his glacier. One of the main problems is that there is no glacier anywhere even NEAR the area the story is taking place in, which appears to be around the Seven Thrones, and I see no reason this dragon would randomly migrate to elven lands for no obvious reason.
Basically, he needs a motivation. And maybe a personality. I'd like a personality.