[quote=@1Charak2] I'll say a good thing first, it is a very detailed sheet. I just have some worries. Firstly, His sense of smell is much too good if he can smell blood that well. If it was magus-enhanced that is one thing, but he is for the most part a normal guy so it seems a little off. Especially since its just 'the smell of blood'. Secondly, I need to ask why he needs a car of all things inside of one of the most optimised (for trains) metropolis. Especially since the premise of the rp is going into different 'domains' as well as having to navigate the city to find them, A car just isn't the most optimal thing for this, Unless of course your implying its effectively also his 'mobile base/he lives in it' then that's fine. Im just curious what the intent is behind the car is all. [/quote] The smell of blood thing was because I thought it was cool. So if you don't want me to have it or reduce it I think that is fine. [hr] The intent of the car was to be a mobile base/somewhere for him to live as I think that's really cool.