Firstly, thank you for your reply. It means to me to know someone actually read this. 

[quote=@Calle]Ah, you write never as newer. It took me a moment to realise it. 
Why have you decided to do that?[/quote]
It's a thing with my writing that I've done since I was a kid. No idea why I started way back when, I guess english being a foreign language it just sounded right to me or something. But now it's just a trademark thing I do. :)

[quote]And the italics for talking, is that a style choice? Usually people use italics for thoughts, so it took me a bit to get used to the curisive sentences being spoken words.[/quote]
I am generally used to using quoted italics for talking and regular italics for words. This is mostly because just quotes didn't stand out that well on the graphic themes of the other forums I used to visit. What's the etiquette here so that I might adjust?

[quote]Overall though, I like this story. It's mysterious.[/quote]
It's a story about an old RPG character of mine. I picked up where I left her off all those years ago. Just when she'd thought she couldn't get into any more trouble. xD If anyone is interested I can keep the story going.