[@PPQ Purple] Eh don't sweat it too much.  A lot of us are old-hat rpers and tend to be a bit wordy is all.  Your post looked fine to me except for a typo or two, but that happens all the time so whatever.

Less-is-more sometimes.  Never feel like you have to reach the same length of postage as some of us or have to go out of your way to put in soundtracks, etc.  Some people just like adding some extra flare.

Well if nothing else, nothing wrong in going over a post you've already done and sprucing it up a smidge if you feel like it.