[quote=@IceHeart]
[@PPQ Purple] Eh don't sweat it too much.  A lot of us are old-hat rpers and tend to be a bit wordy is all.  Your post looked fine to me except for a typo or two, but that happens all the time so whatever.

Less-is-more sometimes.  Never feel like you have to reach the same length of postage as some of us or have to go out of your way to put in soundtracks, etc.  Some people just like adding some extra flare.

Well if nothing else, nothing wrong in going over a post you've already done and sprucing it up a smidge if you feel like it.
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It's just that I've been out of the game for a decade or so and am thus a bit paranoid about screwing my chances on this one shot in my life I have at getting back into the hobby I enjoyed for many years. And thus I overreacted... sigh. I think I nailed the opening part though. Bonus points to anyone old enough to get the reference from that first paragraph.