[quote=@Myling] [@Aewin]Thank you! I tried again and got it work little better, there's still some mistakes tho. And I may also change the fc since I'm not sure if I like the current one anymore. [hider=Florian Schneider][color=silver][center][img]https://i.imgur.com/I7HS01f.png[/img][/center][color=#3A916E][sub]𝐓 𝐇 𝐄 𝐁 𝐀 𝐒 𝐈 𝐂 𝐒[/sub][/color][hr] [indent][color=#3A916E][b]Name[/b] [/color] [indent]Florian Schneider [indent]Not any nicknames he wants to be called[/indent][/indent][/indent] [indent][color=#3A916E][b]Age[/b] [/color] [indent]27[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=#3A916E][b]Gender[/b] [/color] [indent]Male[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=#3A916E][b]Sexuality[/b] [/color] [indent]Demisexual[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=#3A916E][b]Occupation[/b] [/color] [indent]Violinist, currently unemployed[/indent][/indent] [color=#3A916E][sub]𝐖 𝐇 𝐀 𝐓 𝐘 𝐎 𝐔 𝐒 𝐄 𝐄[/sub][/color][hr] [indent][color=#3A916E][b]Appearance[/b][/color] [INDENT]177cm/65kg, slim build with some muscles, overgrown dark brown hair: often tied in a man bun, feather like eyebrows, deep greenish blue eyes, few moles sprinkled all over his face, light complexion: doesn’t tan easily, used to wearing suits etc., outside work has more relaxed fashion style: jeans and band shirts[/INDENT] [color=#3A916E][b]Personality[/b][/color] [INDENT]passive | pessimistic | hardworking | sarcastic | shellfish | says what he thinks | blunt | straightforward | strict | perfectionist | complains a lot | loyal | has negative attitude towards everything | open minded | loyal | kind Florian was once an optimistic and cheerful youngman. He enjoyed the company of others and had a positive overview of life but when his dreams were crushed his personality took a complete turn over. Nowadays he is a ghost of his former self. Overall Florian is a very negative and unpleasant person. He has a negative attitude towards everything and he is vocal about it, meaning he complains a lot. He is both pessimistic and passive by nature. He’s not a man of action, he enjoys indoor based peaceful activities. Florian says what he thinks and can be blunt. Some of his better traits are the fact he is hardworking. He is ready to give his all to achieve something he desires. Florian laughs rarely unless it is something unproper or black humor. He is a real perfectionist and he won't stop trying until he's satisfied with the result of his work. Florian demands a lot both from himself and from others making him quite strict. Besides all the negativity Florian is very open minded and he rarely judges anyone. His past self also shines through from time to time and he can be surprisingly loyal and kind to his loved ones.[/INDENT][/indent] [color=#3A916E][sub]𝐈 𝐍 𝐌 𝐘 𝐏 𝐀 𝐒 𝐓[/sub][/color][hr] [indent][color=#3A916E][b]Biography[/b] [/color] [INDENT] [b]Childhood[/b]Florian was born into a middle class German family as the only child. Because Florian’s parents weren't blessed with more children they cherished the one they had, meaning they really enjoyed spoiling him. So when Florian got into music in his early teen years they went together to a music store and let him pick any instrument he wanted. Florian decided that it wasn't enough to play music for fun he had to be the best at what he was doing. Florian did as his parents wished and devoted his whole life to music. [b]teenage years[/b]He was talented and people expected a lot from him. Florian continued practising violin. Learning to play violin perfectly was the most important thing in his life. He didn’t really have time for anything else. He managed to have a couple girl friends, but not any serious relationships. For some reason girls didn’t get excited by a violin guy. However Florian’s hard practising resulted in a lot of good things for him. He started to have a lot of concerts, first in school and local events, eventually leading into bigger events all over the country. By the age of twenty Florian was known all over europe. Around the age of twentytwo he decided to pursue his dreams even more and moved to the states. [b]early adulthood[/b]For a few years Florian was a total nobody in his new home country. He had only a few small gigs, he needed to do the same as in Germany. He just kept accepting offers/gigs and became slowly more famous. Finally at the age of twentysix he got an offer he couldn’t decline: a big classical music.When it finally was time for Florian’s first big concert in the States, he was overly excited. [b]last year[/b]However in the music business it was important to respect elders, something that Florian’s didn't do. The young man was warned he shouldn't outshine the old appreciated musicians. Well that was exactly what he did but not with light consequences. Later in the evening after the concert a bunch of people attacked him saying he should have listened to his superiors. They held him to the ground and crushed his right hand with big rock against the cold asphalt. After that he was never able to play music again. Music was all Florian had ever done so he was lost. [b]current[/b] Florian isolated himself from music: if he couldn’t play violin anymore he didn’t want to enjoy music at all. Florian lost most of his friends, just a couple close ones left. Florian had a depressing episode in his life, but he is slowly trying to get better. There is little hope left: Florian may be able to go for an operation but it’s unsure whether he will ever be able to play music again. Florian’s friends have been trying to cheer them up and one of them forced Florian to go on the cruise. β€œViolin was your first love, but maybe you can get a real lover for once.”[/INDENT] [/indent] [color=#3A916E][sub]𝐌 𝐈 𝐒 𝐂 𝐄 𝐋 𝐋 𝐀 𝐍 𝐄 𝐎 𝐔 𝐒[/sub][/color][hr][indent] [color=#3A916E][b]Other[/b][/color] [INDENT]FC: Marcel Castenmiller [color=#3A916E]color[/color] [list][*]Besides classic music Florian enjoys extreme metal such as black metal Florian right hand looks kinda awful, so he always covers it with bandages or by wearing a leather glove Florian lives currently in New York His mother tongue is german, he is fluent in english and french When he’s angry his german accent turns more prominent He has a hate-love relationship with his name, he thinks it’s unique but too girly at the same time [/list][/INDENT][/indent][/color][/hider] [/quote] You were almost done, there were just full stops in front of the [ hr] codes which needed to be removed! 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