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Saw your avatar and I want to create a B-Wing pilot now >.<
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Fixed. Thanks for making me not double posting, but B-Wings don't exist yet.

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[@Heat] The physical description of a 'few centimetres below six feet' annoys me. You can't mix measurement systems like that! Who do you think you are? Other than that [hider=Review]
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[b]Vader Approves[/b][/hider]

[@Blackmist16] [hider=Review]Are his only skills those with a blade? Why does he speak in broken basic? Unlike most other Trandoshans he would have spent most of his life learning and speaking basic. What happened to the recruiter? Need a tiny little bit more beef in that history. I don't really feel like I know the character, remember the history is how I learn how well you fit with the RP. Also how did he escape the temple? You put him at the temple, how does he get away.[/hider]

[@Yam I Am]
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Palpatine says hell yeah.[/hider]
[@Zarkun]
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[@The Wyrm] A Kel Dor... always good to see.
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My only question is, can I assume he has the ability to cloak himself (make himself invisible) with the Force? It's kind of hinted at a couple of times in the sheet and I'd like to ask before approval. Other than that so far it's simple, but it makes the point well and I like it.[/hider]