[@Stormflyx]Love the character! She's nearly done but she needs a few little things. [hider] [list] [*]It seems you did not finish your history, if you look at the very end of it. (Before the last sentence). I love it though, so dark! [*]Her goal needs slight tweaking. Not to say it is bad or not valid, because I fully suspect she would go to the Blackwood because it is a place where she might find a home. But what would she do once she is there? Find work? Find an abandoned ruin? Hunt treasure? Find love? etc. [*]Daurgrim is the tongue of the Dwarves, so I think you meant "Fluent Dorcha/Dark Elven" [/list] [/hider] Other than that, it's great!