[quote=thewizardguy]
Give me a reason he's in the story. I mean, he's a big, rather generic dragon, and you've cunningly avoided giving him a personality, so I see no reason he should be doing anything besides eating fish on his glacier. One of the main problems is that there is no glacier anywhere even NEAR the area the story is taking place in, which appears to be around the Seven Thrones, and I see no reason this dragon would randomly migrate to elven lands for no obvious reason.Basically, he needs a motivation. And maybe a personality. I'd like a personality.
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*she* and i avoided giving her a personality in order to be able to change it as the story progresses, and she'd migrate to expand her hoarde... also, don't talk to me about her being generic. you literally said they were the generic dragons -_-