[@Zoey Boey]Im a sucker for Cass Cain. However I need some changes.

[hider=Critique]The first one is the biggest one. She reads just like Cass does from a DC wiki, name and all. I'm taking inspired characters that are similar, but not the same as their big label counterparts. Which means David Cain and Lady Shiva don’t exist. You can craft similar people to them, but like Cass, I’m not looking for their DC counterparts. I’m looking for your characters.

I think the concept for merging Cass with Nebula is neat. However that never really gets the chance to shine. There’s only one throw away line about her being enhanced via surgery. I’d like to see more of Nebula shine through to make a really unique character.

Once you make those changes I’ll look back through your CS again.[/hider]