I will take both of your advice and try to flesh out more of the Shooting Stars and perhaps mages at least by Arn's point of view.  needless to say I can edit anything that does not seemt o fit with the Lore or direction already created. 

One question though.  I had assumed that the Viemiese were more like the Kamera rouge or perhaps soviet Russia in their conquest mentality.  Yet as I read it, it sounds more like a setting of the 100 year war between England and France.  So are the Viemese not truly evil just as the Belisians are not completely saints? It might help in the future when describing NPC interactions etc.