[@Zoey Boey]Alright, I read it over. I just have two questions, then it’s accepted.

1. How long had she been at The Academy? Your backstory didn’t include that.
2. When she escaped were the other children still there? If so, are they the “bad guys from her old school”?

Overall I enjoy the changes you made. I really like the added Nebula bits. It ties her together better than before.