I guess my whipping boy Ora can catch a break.

[@Tuujaimaa] for Sir Aulus
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You privately told me that the general idea was to have a sort of corrupted (or at least susceptible to dark influence) knight from Paterdomus as your rogue being. It's a cool idea and one that we like, though it must be said that this is only vaguely alluded to in the myth. Still, from my own CS for Caius I know how it can be hard to portray the powers etc. of human characters especially if they are meant to be a more progressive thing that develops IC.

That lack of being able to demonstrate Sir Aulus' powers or general theme in the myth is the only thing to really criticize, and it's not even a big one. For early plotpoints we already know he'll be going to Justiciar Drusus, which is a nice tie in, and hopefully over the course of an IC post or two the character can be established and fleshed out.

Something worth noting is that Aulus is also the name of the current Pontiff of Paterdomus -- an interesting coincidence (or maybe not -- the Pontiff is an old guy and seems to have held his rank for quite some time, so maybe a young knight would have been named after him), but not a problem per se as Ora noted that history had plenty of guys named Gregory or James or Henry, and havign some common names makes sense in any setting.

CS approved.[/hider]