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[hider=Syndrome]
[@Syndrome]

You should elaborate slightly more on the magical organization you're affiliated too, if they're original. I'd like you to give me more on the process of Architecture magecraft, as well. 
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[hider=Mr President]
[@Mr President]

Co-GM had some concerns about wording for the knife, Fall, so throw them a DM sometime. Otherwise fine.
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[hider=ShadowKingman]
[@ShadowKingman]

Make the mecha around code geass tier in height. I'd also specialize the mecha a bit more. 
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[hider=Reflection]
[@Reflection]

You said you were doing reworks so I'll wait u w u
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[hider=Letter Bee]
[@Letter Bee]

You'll need to focus the rings, a mystic code usually only serves one function rather than acting as multiple spells. You may want to make Orbis a scrying tool instead of a time divination tool. 
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[hider=Seirei No Hai]
[@Seirei No Hai]

I'd like more expansion on starlight tracing and how it brings together these various foundations; and also the cultural flavoring of your magecraft. Thought acceleration is not magecraft, and is Atlas only, so remove that. 
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[hider=Gracefully]
[@Gracefully]

Co-GM handled your review over DMs, so leaving that to them uwu
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[hider=Yukitamas]
[@Yukitamas]

I believe you were making some changes so we'll wait to see how that turns out.
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