[@Metztli] This is mostly pretty good. Just a couple things, primarily Arskel is not the kind of place you send your children, but if they had a good reason that's all fine. I get the impression there is a secret involved in your background, if you'd like you can PM me more details about that.

Otherwise its good to me, I'm hesitant with mind-altering magic but Devil's Tongue seems pretty laid back so I can dig it.