[@Dr Lovecraft][@Dark Cloud] Do let me know if I overstep. I'm try to be helpful but I know I have pushed too hard sometimes. I don't want to cross the line between "helpful critique" and "making someone feel bad about their work". [quote=@Dark Cloud] [@Prince of Seraphs] So far the abilities look okay. But I'll give the rest of it a reread in a bit. [/quote] Cool, I'll see about writing a bit more in depth on the plasmids. I just copied their in game description so they could probably use a bit of clarification.