Okay, since both of you two are vying for the last slot...

[@Not Fungus]: I still think your bio is strange narratively, you mention him having no desires but he desires to regain his original self ?I think you need to work on his personality more.

[@1Charak2]: I think you need to go over your bio and clean up the personality and backstory a bit. My Co-GM especially is having a little trouble with the analysis(though I think it's a problem I'm having as well) and I think the best course of action is to review it and make it read more smoothly. Don't worry about changing any of the content, just reword it and reorder it so it reads more smoothly.