[@Bork Lazer]

I think I'm done. If you want me to elaborate on or change anything lemme know. 

Also, "In the big bad world, a person's liable to be shut down and thrown in the meat-chipper over a misunderstanding. Working in Crack City, Starfield has learned that simple gestures of manners and respect go a long way to staying on the up-right and the living" are perhaps the best sentences I've ever written.