[quote=@DraconiWarlord] Here's my CS: The Summoner: A Wolf Shifter (tell me if I should change this to dwarf and not wolf shifter) Za'vunhul, more commonly known as the Howler, is a Wolf Shifter and a Summoner mage. Gender: Male. Elven Appearance: pure white hair, and sky blue eyes. He would wear a grey wolf-fur robe, covering his body. A scar running from his left eyebrow to his nose is visible on his face. History: Born to the ancient race of Uulfrs, talking humanoid wolves, which are now scattered due to the Great War. He has the ability to shift from a wolf to a human. Wanting to be able to protect, he learned Summoning magic and used that to fend off attackers. While he mostly summons wolves to attack enemies, his abilities are not limited by that and can summon any animal that is related or is a canine. Personality: Mysterious, cocky, and sarcastic. Wolf Appearance: His head is white, and rest of fur is grey. His scar can still be seen in his wolf form. He is a humanoid wolf that walks on his hind legs. Strengths: He can summon a full pack of wolves at the peak of his power, and is very fast and agile, and has large stamina. He also is strategic, and what he lacks in close-up attacks, he makes up for in ranged attacks and intelligence. Flaws: It's hard for other people to earn his trust, and he only joined the quest to prevent more destruction. He also is a bit cocky and believes he can go into any battle and win, though in actuality, it's far from the truth. [/quote] You need some physical weaknesses to balance out the strengths. I would like a little more fleshed out and organization.