[quote=@Prince Potter]
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Sounds good to me Bork! Since I slipped in after you gave everyone else feedback, is there anything I need to change about mine?
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Nothing really major that would be considered objectively terrible. Just minor spelling errors in your CS and so forth that could use a second look. Otherwise, anything else I have issue with is just a subject of taste.