I got my OC, is this acceptable? is there anything I should tweak? :) [hider=The Black Lotus] [b]Player Name: [/b] @VeyrinDay [b]Primary Character: [/b] The Black Lotus [b]Secret Identity: [/b] Sophia Hannah Cantor [b]Age: [/b] 24 [b]Usual Base of Operations: [/b] Department of Archaeology, Miskatonic University [b]Day Job: [/b] Research associate and doctoral candidate [b]Powers: [/b] - Levitation - Telekinesis - 150% of top human ability (the best record normal human can achieve + some more) - Super switch (She can choose to boost one attribute at a time. When she switches, her chosen attribute raises to 400% top human ability while her other attributes went down to only 90%): --- Superhuman strength --- Superhuman speed --- Superhuman endurance --- Superhuman acuity [b]Weaknesses: [/b] She's basically human, so whatever can hurt or even kill a human has the same effect to her. However, a "kill switch" hidden in an ancient spell book written in unknown symbols of an unknown language spoken by unknown creatures that probably had different vocal organ, is able to nullify Sophia's powers and inflict her with a terrible pain in the process. [b]Skills: [/b] - Analytical thinking: She's an academic person, what else to expect? - Gymnastics: Sophia took gymnastics as an extracurricular activity during her school years. She won a championship as the first place winner. Some skills were retained during her time being a The Black Lotus. - Amateur Dancing: Knows ballet, latin, and jazz dance; Sophia took some courses as side activities during her college years. This kept her healthy and being in good shape. [b]Appearance: [/b] [img]https://img-9gag-fun.9cache.com/photo/a8EMXWd_700bwp.webp[/img] [b]BRIEF Bio: [/b] Sophia got her power when she tried to analyze a strange tome that her colleague found deep in the underground archive. Since that moment, a strange figure visited Sophia in her dream on nightly basis. That figure, appeared as a woman, repeatedly said something that initially Sophia was not able to understand. It was after the same figure showed a sequence of symbols that Sophia began to see. The symbols was written at one part of the tome. As she matched the sounds and the symbols, Sophia was able to finally recite a complete line of that book. Little she knew that she had just activated an ancient magic. Through that magic, Sophia awakened her power, but the process also flooded her brain with a stream of information about an imminent ritual sacrifice that would be conducted by a group of sentient creatures of the ancient world, currently in hibernation. When the stars come into their right place, a catastrophic event would begin in that mankind would be sacrificed for the coming of an ancient Eldritch Overlord. Sophia's utterance of the spell resulted in the early awakening of the creatures as their powers are still immature, allowing them to be stopped before the cataclysmic event begin. Even so, the task of stopping the Eldritches fell into Sophia's hand, but their presence among human community is still unknown. However, there's a rumor about a cult that worships the Eldritches that the members are a cabal of mafia ringleaders. Sophia also felt obliged to put herself in their way. Sophia's dark attire gained her a moniker, The Black LOtus. [b]Supporting Characters: [/b] - Prof. Malcolm Girondin (her doctoral advisor) - Samuel Reyes (FBI officer) Secondary Character: N/A Additional Notes: N/A [/hider]