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Interesting. I like it. Although I'd like at least a brief summary of his history. Histories are good because it tells us as players if our characters have a chance of having met before, or if they may know each other prior to the start of the RP. It doesn't have to be super long. Maybe a paragraph.
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At most he'd get a few sentences, since I doubt they'd really go through all the trouble of listing his full history from birth to present, rather than just listing how long he's been in the organization along with some of his more notable achievements. Not to say they don't know it of course, I assume they have access to government documents and all, but again his full biography seems like a very inconsequential thing for an organization to note.

Also, I've made an edit.