[quote=@Akayaofthemoon]
[@Dark Cloud]

1. Okay, I looked everything over and I have a few questions. The first is why does he not have a last name? Adopted/fostered or not, usually people still have a last name. I wouldn’t mind so much if there was more detail about that in the background but there is not much I know from that section on the topic. Does he just not like to remember his past? Or some other reason? I can see he has foster parents that sent him to a military school but it doesn’t really say why? Can we have a little more insight on that? I just feel like I don’t know much about the character so I would like to see a bit more.

2. Please look over my rules and read them. There is an important piece missing from your profile that I have requested. 

Thank you and please let me know if you have any questions or concerns!
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I did as I said I'm completely changing the background as I saw that you would bring this up so forget everything you see on the sheet currently and please wait cause I am not done.