[quote=@LSJ Rose] [hider=-Sarina, Cardinal Forged Of Fire--] [center] [color=maroon] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/corelian-crisis-rpg/images/c/c2/Sadie.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20190123051952&path-prefix=pt-br [/img] [color=maroon][h1][b][u]--Sarina--[/u][/b][/h1] [h2][i]--Cardinal Forged Of Fire--[/i][/h2][/color] [color=red][b]Character Archetype[/b][/color] Rogue [color=red][b]Personality[/b][/color] --What personality does your character tend to naturally adopt the most among their many resurrections?-- Observant, Courageous, Charming Impatient, Sarcastic, Quarrelsome [color=red][b]Blessings[/b][/color] [b][u]Courage Of The Fire Cardinal:[/u][/b] This blessing gives a temporary boost of courage to anyone who touches the cardinal [i]without[/i] fear or hesitation. [color=red][b]Curses[/b][/color] --Does your character have some sort of unholy or eldritch force that detriments them? Like blessings, these are optional. Don't feel the need to make curses absolutely cripple your character... Unless that's what you're going for...-- [b][u]Cardinal:[/u][/b] A bird follows her around, typically found on her shoulder. Not any kind of bird, but a cardinal. Attempting to swat it away or take it off her shoulder only results in it striking back at the attacker. A source for the Courage Of The Fire Cardinal Blessing. [color=red][b]Relics[/b][/color] --Has your character resurrected with a powerful artifact? Relics will be acquired as the RP continues, but I am willing to allow a maximum of one starting relic. Once again, this is optional, and I was ask that if you do take a relic to start, that it isn't overpowered or unreasonable. Try to justify why your character would have this relic upon being resurrected, even if they might not remember why they have it.-- She has none, as of now [color=red][b]Gold[/b][/color] [color=gold][i]--90--[/i][/color] (delete this -->)Your current gold is reflected here as merchants and other denizens of the Spire might be willing to trade with you(<--delete this) [/color] [/center] [/hider] can someone help me with this? ;-; [/quote] I like the idea! What is it you're needing help for? Things I'd like to address briefly: A. How does the cardinal act as a curse as it sits on her shoulder? Does it whisper insane, old god phrases into her ear? Does it chirp every time she attempts to stealth (definitely a negative as she's a rogue archetype)? Is it a really fat bird and it weighs her down? All that to say without further detriments, I would just move it up from curse and add it to the blessing. Personally I don't think it's powerful enough to warrant a curse unless you want to add more. B. The blessing almost feels redundant. My initial read was that touching the cardinal would grant courage to someone already courageous. I think I understand it now that if courage is required for a situation and the cardinal is available and amenable, then it would definitely be a boon; e.g. jumping a chasm.