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The concept is really good. Exploring immortality and it's relationship to mortality is a sunderland to play in for a writer. Some of the writing could be improved, but the presentation of theme and the way it progressed made it good, I wanted to read more of it when I was done. I liked how you only picked 3 personalities to meet on the next life, and I like the way you showcased Amaranth as a desire for continued enlightenment. 

There's a lot of good stuff in that little bit of writing, you should feel good about it imo.