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[color=#99ccff][b]Callsign:[/b][/color]
Rain
[color=#99ccff][b]Gender:[/b][/color]
Female
[color=#99ccff][b]Age: [/b][/color]
20
[color=#99ccff][b]Role: [/b][/color]Researcher/Doctor/engineer
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[color=#99ccff][b]Origin: [/b][/color]Pod Person from before the empire began to truly form.
[color=#99ccff][b]Personality: [/b][/color]Positive, Resourceful, Intelligent, Quiet, Observant, Passive
[color=#99ccff][b]Known Features: [/b][/color]Amaya has a lot of little knicks and scarring from her various experimentations and research that has backfire, an obvious expectation. In her rebellious stage of life before taking on her responsibility, she has a left shoulder tattoo that held an Anatomical heart with flowers:[hider="Tattoo:"][img]https://i60.servimg.com/u/f60/20/13/46/09/69083310.jpg[/img][/hider]

[color=#99ccff][b]Attire: [/b][/color]Amaya absolutely hates to wear her personal uniform as it tends to be too restricting for her liking. However, she will wear it but be annoyed with it very often. When she can or is allowed to she prefers a simple white tank top and a pair of pants or even better shorts. In her quarters, she tends to just stay in her undergarments since those are her private quarters after all. If she can go out as a civilian, she prefers a shirt under a plain jacket with jeans and shoes.

[color=#99ccff][b]History: [/b][/color]Amaya is the youngest of three children, one being an elder brother and the other a twin sister. From a young age, Amaya has always taken to books and learning new things, finding her knack for picking things up with just a glance or observation of those and stuff around her. One thing she took towards was medicine and researching almost anything which led to her inventions of minor robotics and making prosthetic limbs of whatever material she has on hand. At the age of 6, she made her first small, self-learning Ai ball named Tama. It is a small AI that mainly seemed to listen to her or observe her and hasn’t really taken to anything else but a small rolling ball of a companion with some needed limbs and storage space for miscellaneous stuff.

Growing up in a rich Political and Military thick family history, Amaya had all the possible resources to do with whatever she wished finding herself to be a prodigy with a high level of intelligence which quickly got her to college at the age of twelve. Even at her young age, she has assisted many military specialists and doctors with their innovative medical tasks and even assisted with formulas and calculations for some of the earliest prototypes of mobile suits and cybernetics used in the modern-day. Every year she rose ranks faster than growing into different size pants.

At the age of 13, she had become known as The greatest triple threat of the century in mechanical engineering, Medical, and research combining the two, even allowing a perfection of an AI she calls Tama.  She was getting contracts of all kinds as well as requests and testings of anything from watching field tests of combatants in and out of their suits to literally checking formula tables of operation systems down to testing and recommending various selected soldiers with unique traits about themselves too literally selecting who will proceed who and when. However, at the age of twenty, she was to go to one of the first space colonies on a tested spacecraft by another private company; one she was told would be perfectly fine and didn’t need to be worried about. 

It was on a direct route to one of the newer space colonies when things took a turn for the worst. Chaos broke out and the selected crew members along with herself were put into cryo pods that were to deploy back safely into earth’s orbit, made by her own sector and formulas. They work beautifully in keeping the occupants alive and in cryo sleep, however, she couldn’t have calculated the ship's explosion during the deployment that injured the trajectory systems along with a lot of the other sensors and guidance causing the sleeping inhabitants to just be floating in their peaceful sleep, waiting to be found and awaken once again, if Time and the objects of space don’t end them first.

[color=#99ccff][b]Skills: [/b][/color] Amaya is very observant and knows when to keep out of the way of others. Her unique photo and audio memory allow her to take in everything to the slightest detail, great for her note-taking and telling others of information they have asked for her. Amaya is quick to pick up any various tasks needed just by watching others or being shown only once. She isn't a master mechanic or an expert at building massive mobile suits but working on minor so and formulas is a hobby she has learned to use in her medical research with the fruit of her labor being her Tama.
[color=#99ccff][b]Items: [/b][/color]
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[*]A Small artificial intelligence rolling ball of circuits called Tama.
[*]A small locket containing an old family photo within it on one side and a picture of herself and her twin on the other side.
[*]A ZAFT pilot suit
[*]UMF-5 ZnO
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Just for the history mostly a peev, the second paragraph is a run on and I think you could adjust it to look better. 

Rereading it I overlooked this part, because she's being described as a triple threat, but a threat to what? You say just after this that she begins to receive numerous contracts, and then proceeds to a tremendous amount of research in general.
"-The greatest triple threat of the century in mechanical engineering, Medical, and research combining the two-"

This also needs to be reworded as I'm unsure what this means precisely.
"-mobile suits but working on minor so and formulas is a hobby she has learned to use in her medical research-"