[quote=@Dark Cloud]
[@Lugubrious] There I changed it to severely damaging it's chest cavity. I can change that too if you'd like?
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That's alright, but as you go forward keep in mind it's always okay to ask me beforehand rather than try something and then ask if you need to change it. And if you do that, it would be best to do so in DMs. Since the posts here even in OOC are more structured and take up more space than chatroom messages, doing six or seven posts in a row gives the impression of clutter.