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[@Dark Cloud] Not bad so far, just remember that your aspect is [color=1E90FF][b]PROGRESS[/b][/color] exactly that way. Also I find a totally inorganic being with a mind and soul a bit sketchy as far as how souls work, so would you be alright with a Ghost in the Shell kind of setup where he's 99% inorganic but still has some hindbrain or something?

[@ZAVAZggg] I like it so far. He would definitely be among the New Gods that got the most fucked over by their ascension, from what I'm seeing.

[@Sanity43217] Not bad but very, very, very similar to Dark Cloud's character. We can brainstorm ways to make your guy more distinct.

[@rezay] I don't think the concept is bad, just not right for this RP. I'd prefer to see a character rather than like, an antagonistic force.


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That's what I thought after writing it up as well. Sorta hard to make a character of it, though maybe I could pull off something similar.
I do like the edgy aesthetic

If I can make a suggestion, I'd say give a couple more examples of Aspects, I got pretty hung up there. Your description helped a lot, but only included examples from K6BD (as far as I can tell). If we're to make our own, more points of reference would be helpful.

I'll leave the CS up for the benefit of others.