Hmm... Okay, just a couple of small things:

[QUOTE]Race: (False) Paleblood Hunter[/QUOTE]
So which is it? I need to know that for my handling of the character, at least, even if you don't want to make it publicly known. Just as a reminder, (false) Paleblood is my shorthand way of referencing "false Paleblood [i]or[/i] real Paleblood," which means it can reference both the false and genuine disease. I'd assume that you mean false Paleblood Hunter since you included the parenthesis, but I do need that part clarified.

[QUOTE]Ludolf Reinhardt was born several years before the events of the Night of the Bloodmoon[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE]Age: 34[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=First sentence in the OP]This RP takes place about [b]five years[/b] after the events of the game[/QUOTE]
So, something about this timeline doesn't add up. "Several" is defined by the dictionary as "more than two but not many." In this case, however, "several" would appear to mean 29. From the rest of the CS it seems as though it's simply the word "several" that confuses me, really, because it seems to acknowledge that a long time has passed and seems to generally have a fairly orderly timeline.

Is Ludolf's caretaker and/or his adoptive sister (for lack of a better term) characters that we would be familiar with, or also your original creations? If so, if you have any further details on them feel free to write me a PM so I can maybe use them in my plotting.

Other than that everything seems to be in order. Mostly I just need to ascertain whether Ludolf is a Paleblood Hunter or a false Paleblood Hunter, and then the character is accepted.