[@Write] sorry it took some time to get back to you, I missed the notification on your post.

Anyway, I like it! The only note I really have is that Aoife's family wouldn't have to save up to go to send her to Nova Lux, it's basically mandatory as long as you test magic positive. 

Other than that I don't think there's anything to mention. If you're still interested I'd be happy you have you join us. You can drop in to the [url=https://discord.gg/AR5YNvwP]discord server[/url] here when you get a chance.