[h3][b]Sheet Feedback[/b][/h3]
Any and all questions can be PM’d to the GMs either on Discord or here on the forum (preferably Discord as we are mainly active there). You can also comment here in the OOC thread. 
[@Dark Cloud]
[hider=Feedback on Therias]
It took us a while to realise you double-posted your sheet, so we assumed it was unfinished. However, after reading through your sheet, we think it possesses all the qualities we could ask for! Saucer only remarks that it would be nice if you elaborated on what the effects of the True Form are on that which or whomsoever is unfortunate enough to experience it first-hand. 
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[@Chris488]
[hider=Feedback on Ekundayo]
With the exception of the domain, the sheet is accepted - wonderful myth, by the way, sets the tone well. The domain should be defined and described as to show what aspect of death your goddess specialises in. While the myth serves to hint at the aspect of death Ekun occupies, we would prefer it if you could elaborate on it in the domain section. Should you have trouble, we encourage you to check out the other sheets or reach out to us GMs for direct feedback.
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[@ActRaiserTheReturned]
[hider=Feedback on Mowyn]
Okay, we had originally written that the myth was too light, but then you changed it. Upon reading it a second time, however, there are some points here that need to be changed: No god is omniscient, even if Mowyn has nine personalities. We will allow the personality split, of course, as long as they all are gods of the same domain and function as one unit.

As for the domain, we felt that references to established series should be kept to a minimum. It would be best if things were described in full rather than relying on concepts and phenomena from other franchises.
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[@Dog]
[hider=Feedback on Armok]
With the exception of the domain, the sheet looks good! The myth is very fitting for a civilisation goddess, and both forms are well-described and acceptable.

Regarding the domain, we feel like it was a bit all over the place and didn’t quite narrow down what aspect of civilisation you wish to embody. There was a strong focus on tools and the improvement of tools, but that alone is only a facet of civilisation. If you wish to focus more on this, we wish for you to specify it down some more to exactly what sort of powers the domain gives Armok. We are also curious as to what is meant by the self-perpetuation of civilisation - we can discuss this in PMs. 
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[@Lord Zee]
[hider=Feedback on Wyn]
To quote: “Absolutely lovely and a great job on the sheet, Zee knows his business and does his writing well.”

Accepted, fam.
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[@ZAVAZggg]
[hider=Feedback on Xem]
Both sheets are very, very good, but if you would like any help to decide between Xem and Memteus, us GMs find ourselves favouring Xem. His sheet is exemplary with a very good domain description and fascinating myth, and corruption is a much more flexible domain to play around than contracts, we feel.

However, you stand free to choose. Memteus’ sheet is also accepted if you can fill out the myth a bit more. 
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[@Zurajai]
[hider=Feedback on Lonn]
Nuke lance OP. Sheet’s accepted, fam.
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[@Valor]
[hider=Feedback on Celvanya]
Fantastic myth! Looking forward to playing alongside her, Valor. Our only comment is really just that the domain description terms Celvanya as a goddess of war in all its aspects, but that, we deemed to be too broad. If you remove that line, the sheet is accepted with gold stars!
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[@Theyra]
[hider=Feedback on Voi]
We would like a description of what the Souls domain entails before we can accept your sheet. If you wonder what this entails, don’t hesitate to look at others’ sheets or ask us GMs for aid. 
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[@AdorableSaucer]
[hider=Feedback on Chakravarti]
“Accepted,” said Napoléon and crowned himself.
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[@DracoLunaris]
[hider=Feedback on Exo]
A very tasty sheet, fam, but we have one very crucial requirement for it to be accepted: Exo unfortunately cannot have knowledge of other worlds, at least not of worlds beyond Galbar before the Apocalypse. They must come into existence at the same time as the rest of the gods and be as unknowledgable as the rest about the world. What Exo does after their inception, though, is free game.
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[@Double Capybara]
[hider=Feedback on I’Iro]
Awesome concept, fam, that we are really looking forward to seeing more of! Approved!
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[@Legion02]
[hider=Feedback on Uwné]
Dope ass sheet and myth, fam. Make the domain description a little meatier and you’re good to go.
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[@Zinita]
[hider=Feedback on Paratiri]
Hell yeah for elemental gods! Accepted!
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[@Frettzo]
[hider=Feedback on Astella]
Dope concept, fam, but we did react somewhat to the myth: A race is an awesome idea for an illusion race, but mentions of doping, 110 meter Hurdles and seconds with decimals seem a little too modern for the 16th century - the measuring units in particular seemed somewhat out of place in a fantasy setting. Would it be possible to turn the time dial a little further back and remove references to such?
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[@Crispy Octopus]
[hider=Feedback on Orynn Kaseyk]
Got nothin’, fam. Dope domain; dope myth. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Approb.
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[@Crusader Lord]
[hider=Feedback on Arira]
Super dope! Immediately thought of Mufasa explaining the circle of life to Simba. Approb! One small thing is that we wondered if you could define some borders for your domain, just so we know what isn’t counted among Cycles? You are already accepted, but we think this could make the domain appear clearer and cleaner. 
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[@WrongEndoftheRainbow]
[hider=Feedback on the God of Secrets]
Golden, fam. Accepted af. 
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[@King of Rats]
[hider=Feedback on Alzria]
Solid! A great opposition to dreams. We approb!
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