[quote=@mattmanganon] [@DragonofTheWest] Good CS so far, but i'm gonna need a little more on the enemies, as well as some expansion on the "Where your character is going" part of the story overview. Pretty much, i'm gonna need this CS to tell me, roughly, where you want to take Jon in his story. [/quote] No problem, I left things kind of vague because I'm not sure what what is exactly the state of world affairs/current events are. If you have any insight on how you want to start things off I'll make the proper arrangements