[@Dark Jack] Complete sense. I'd like to think I'm a half decent writer but I'll admit that describing physical features in a good, cohesive way is not my forte (same goes for personality). I'll try to fix it up a bit later today and make it look a little more readable. Thanks for the tips!

One question to add, how should I pop into the game? Am I going to wake up at the same clinic where the other woke up or a different one?