[quote=@Hitman] I did think we went over the fact that your character is meant to be a new Communicator. The way you have it here indicates that she has been a communicator for roughly 7 or so years, and the more experienced Communicators are definitely not meant to be the focal point of the RP. The reason for choice I also found to be strange. Why would Scathach have to seek Communicators out herself? If anything, assuming a physical form for so long would be vastly more draining than just doing it the old-fashioned way of divine location. I think the backstory here needs a major overhaul overall. EDIT: There are also some grammar/punctuation issues that could be fixed. [/quote] Oh, I would need to reword it. She has been training under her, but not necessarily becoming a Communicator herself. That's after she's finished her service. I'll edit out the personal form.