[quote=thewizardguy] The character is fine. The problem, as with most characters created in such a way, that there's absolutely no reason for him to become involved with the story. As such, I'm going to make my own addition. When you killed Lord Radel's firsborn, he got rather pissed at you. Swearing revenge, he devoted his entire life to the hunting down and murder of your race. For the first time in more than five hundred years, hunting parties search the villages for people with ears or tails. Wild foxes are slaughtered in the forests, and they're gradually growing closer to the village of Kuniho, which has up until now managed to live in relative peace. Through your act, you've doomed your own people, and Lord Rader is after you most of all. He's posted pictures of your face in half the villages in the Alderian Alliance, and forced you to flee to the Seven Thrones to avoid being brutally murdered by angry peasants. [/quote] Oh! That's a really good idea, I'll add it right away.