[quote=@Stormflyx] [@Sep] Great post dude! I really like how much you showed us of Conor's inner thoughts, it was a nice opening to him as a character and said a lot while still leaving some intrigue for later. There was an almost macabre energy to it, and I love how you have carved out this little nook for him in a tech-heavy setting that feels so much more classical and fantasy-esque. It really adds to his characterisation and builds on his aesthetic. Similarly too, [@Hillan] also a solid opening post. You've started carefully laying down some foundations for the mystery of Julian's character, and you made his character feel very distinct in a post which was really just about establishing the setting for the roleplay. I really like that I've got such a clear image of Julian and his mannerisms. I'm really interested in just what those thoughts and [i]memories[/i] were about. [/quote] I love this and want to see more of these comments in the OOC as we progress.