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[@Dead Cruiser]

Similarly, you've really said so much about our Dandy in this first post. What I liked about this post was how you really made feel how difficult it must be to be Dandelion in this whole new world, you took us from darkened confusion, and contemplation in the darkness about this new situation - to this feeling of joy when the lights came on and I loved that touch. I loved their thoughts about stairs; so simple, so effective and it leaves this wonderful lingering image of the character. Just, truly a good example of quality characterisation. 

I'll be honest, I wasn't sure I was getting the concept of Dandelion from the sheet alone and I was patiently waiting to read from inside their head. This post really gave me that extra context, and yeah, fully sold on them. Excited for more. Please write some more. Now. 

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Thanks, I really appreciate it.

I can understand how it would be difficult to "get" Dandelion before seeing them actually play out. There's definitely a lot more about them that has yet to be played out on screen that I've excited to get to. I'll be happy to post again as soon as we get through this first round robin.