Battle scene in Disney World, that so has to happen! And I can attest that Crimson Flame makes fun characters. Liking the names btw! Mara is a bit less obvious, it means bitter, as in "bitter lemon" like the soft drink. That and it fits her personality and backstory. Conner's going to annoy the hell out of her, but I'm sure she'll understand him in time, since she knows what it's like to grow up in another's shadow.