[quote=@VitaVitaAR] [@thecatinaction]: To begin with, I think you need to describe his personality with some more detail. While you don't even need to go as far as I did, a short paragraph is preferred at least. The same for his skills. [/quote] I realized the personality was very short. The brief description started as his personality, but turned into the description. So I have to hit it again.