i already had a look at the framework you had in mind, but its really in an early phase and i first wanted to check if the overall specifications of the character were acceptable. ill make it look nice and tidy later. And ill keep this feedback in mind. i guess I'm going with rank 3 because of the brute natural power and no skill. I'm not quite sure how i can include having no control of the dragon form because its her true form and she should be having more control than while in human form. i can take away the fighting instinct, and have her need to adjust to moving in dragon form. as well as add a penalty because her dragon form was always dormant. making it so, that it became stiff, weak, malnourished and still small, having to build up strength. maybe having an initial growth spurt of about 9 months. where she will change from: 33 percent in size and 20 percent in abilities and parameters, into the described size and power of the character sheet. with fire breathing and resistances starting from zero. [quote]You've specified that she's human in default so that means she needs to transform into dragon form before she can actually do anything right? I'll need to know the details of the transformation as well. I need to know stuff like is there a time limit in dragon form? Is there a condition? It's also probably a good idea to make that a separate ability. [/quote] she starts out having no dragon benefits while in human form but later develop them as she gets stronger in dragon form. i would like to go with: because her true form is a dragon, there's no time limit for dragon form, if anything, being human should take more effort and should cost more energy.(i guess explaining why her dragon form is malnourished) i can make her a bunch weaker in human form as well i guess. maybe a 4 second transformation delay to turn dragon, and taking 20 seconds to turn human. [quote]Draconic Element Manipulation is never gonna come up. There's not going to be any other dragons unless something funky is happening or you want them to and I approve so probably don't bother with that one.[/quote] a way to increase power beyond the natural specifications, and a way to still unlock the use of arts and other abilities, allowing for character development. and yea, its just adding some options for the future, if there's ever a need to get stronger. [quote]The part in power bestowal where it says 'self sustenance linked to the dragon', I don't know what that means. Firstly are self sustenance and perpetual nourishment supposed to be different? I'm assuming the Linked to the Dragon part applies to all of the abilities and not just the self sustenance part.[/quote] yes all the abilities gifted by bestowal are linked in aptitude with the dragon. and ill just go with the two nourishment abilities being the same thing. [quote]Also what do you mean she grows when she eats in dragon form in the Consistent growth and Adaptive development section? Is it if she eats anything? Does she have to eat something specific?[/quote] inherently she never completely stops growing if she keeps eating, and all that is required to get stronger is eating a proportionate amount of sheep cattle or other types of meat sources. shell gain power just because of growing in size and cant obtain new abilities. ill just remove the adaptive development thing aswell.