[@Cyrania] Of course! I like the fuller look at Alastrina you give after implementing the changes. The details help a lot!

[@boomerremover] I like Delste's arrogance and self-righteousness! The vanity is a rare flaw which is really interesting to include, especially for a young Jedi. One thing I'll ask is: what is Nikdoris like? I'd be interested in seeing more of that relationship as well as what things might be like on his side rather than purely Delste's. Is he willfully neglectful or just incompetent or is it a mix of both? How has she consequently been treated by the Order at large—do others pity her or try to help?