Apologies for the late replies!

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[@Fiscbryne] Edited Delste's backstory to reflect more of her relationship with Nikdoris and the Order. :)
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The changes you’ve put in work nicely—I love how you shifted from a conflict with the Order in general to a deeply interpersonal one with Delste’s master!

[@Dusty] I like Garner’s haughtiness! He seems full of himself in the way a lot of younger people are when they’re not quite self-aware of their flaws and foibles—it’s very true-to-life! I particularly love that he’s putting on airs—his character feels youthful in a really genuine (if awkward to live through) way.